by Lee Kam-hung.Thesis (M.A.Ed.)--Chinese University of Hong Kong, 1993.Includes bibliographical references (leaves 135-142).TABLE OF CONTENTS --- p.iLIST OF TABLES --- p.ivLIST OF FIGURES --- p.vABSTRACT --- p.viiChapter CHAPTER 1 --- INTRODUCTION --- p.1Chapter 1.1 --- Background of the Study --- p.1Chapter 1.2 --- Purpose of the Study --- p.4Chapter 1.3 --- Significance of the Study --- p.5Chapter CHAPTER 2 --- REVIEW OF LITERATURE --- p.6Chapter 2.1 --- Emphasis of Writing Instruction --- p.6Chapter 2.2 --- Stage Models of Writing --- p.7Chapter 2.3 --- Significance of Revision --- p.10Chapter 2.4 --- Definition of Revision --- p.10Chapter 2.5 --- Measurement of Revision --- p.25Chapter 2.6 --- Empirical Findings in Revisi...